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0 posted 2003-08-15 03:59 AM





~*~
With all the world I want to share
this loving poem I read
My Love's the one who wrote it
and I love what he said

"Fingertips" is the title
his poems are filled with emotion
In each of his loving words
I feel his deep devotion

He says there's much he'd like to say
but words won't reach his lips
So would I let him do the talking
with just his fingertips

He goes into much detail
of his message he wants to convey
With his fingertips and kisses
he'll tell me what he has to say

We know we're very blessed
my dear sweet love and I
We write each other poetry
with a loving sigh

We found our love together
so sensitive and sweet
We love each other so deeply
and are so happy we did meet

For the rest of our lives
we know together we will be
Loving, singing, smiling
and writing each other poetry
~*~




[This message has been edited by garysgirl (08-15-2003 04:06 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-08-15 04:17 AM


very sweet n loving,,,

     


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2 posted 2003-08-15 04:37 AM


Ethel writing is a beautiful caring way to show each other your love
Hope

P.S my husband asked me to write one because it is our anniversary in two weeks time , so I penned  a quick one yesterday , but its gone to page 3 I think

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3 posted 2003-08-15 06:32 AM


Oh Ethel...this is just lovely.  Nothing better than the sharing of poetry of two who love one another so much.

Patricia

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4 posted 2003-08-15 09:12 AM


Glenn, thank you, Sir.  
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Hope, you're so right. When writing, a person
can usually say more of what is felt inside.
Yeah, I know about trying to write a "quick one"
and it turning into three pages or more.
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Patricia, thank you. Yes, it feels good to
write and receive poetry from your loved one.
I like the way you read and share poetry
with your little girls. That's really special, too.  
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Hugs to you and your little girls          
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-08-15 09:27 AM


Beautiful and sweet dear Ethel. Sighs tell so much ...
My husband has conquered me with poetry too ...but now he is rather lazy!
Love and hugs. Margherita

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6 posted 2003-08-15 09:48 AM


Margherita, isn't it special, though, when they
write just for you? All of my love poetry is written
just for my Gary, and he loves it. He likes for me
to print off the replies, too, and send them to him.
He replies to me about the comments on my poems. LOL  
Hugs to you, my friend  
Ethel


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7 posted 2003-08-15 09:51 AM


liked it
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8 posted 2003-08-15 10:06 AM


Thank you so much, Vandana.
I really do appreciate you.
Hugs  
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-08-15 10:42 AM


Awwwww, this is so sweet!!! What a precious thing. The two of you having this love to complete each other. Lovely words as they always are! This is the two of you.
And always a delight.

SharsRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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10 posted 2003-08-15 10:46 AM


This is sweet and beautiful.The two of you have a great love in your hearts and souls.May it remain there forever.
angelblueyes

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11 posted 2003-08-15 10:57 AM


Shara, that's so sweet. Thank you.
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Angel, you are sweet, too. thanks, Lady.  
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I appreciate both of you so much.
Hugs to you both  
Ethel

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12 posted 2003-08-15 11:19 AM


For the rest of our lives
we know together we will be
Loving, singing, smiling
and writing each other poetry
~*~

Who, who, ....says the owl......do you we him..... lol...im so bad aren't I
better to keep the secret, girl, im all loose lips anyhow.
real pretty ethel, as always

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13 posted 2003-08-15 11:21 AM


and he writes poetry too?

Lucky you
M

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(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I certainly hope Gary posts "Fingertips" real soon because I would love to read his poetry too as I believe he too has such a special voice in his heart he wants to share with us all! (kiss on cheek) I too believe it is easier to write out thoughts than speak them because I am a person that cries very easily and if I just say how I feel descriptively, I am bound to get tangled in the bewildering ache, and as I train myself to be a singer, I sing at many notes that many have said makes them cry! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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15 posted 2003-08-16 06:54 PM


A couple who write poetry together, stay together!

Keep those fingertips moving--on the page and off of it!

Lovin' hugs,
Linda

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16 posted 2003-09-02 09:40 AM


Michele, thanks. Yeah, I write all the poems on here, because Gary doesn't have a computer. He writes a lot of poems to me, though, and gives me some ideas. Of course, Gary is my greatest inspiration.
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Maureen, thanks. And, yeah, he really does write poetry...and very, very good poetry, too. Gary is also a very talented artist. He can draw anything he wants to. I am very lucky to have him.  
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Noah, thank you so much for your kind words. Maybe one day Gary will join Passions. I certainly do hope that he can.  
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Linda Lou, thank you. Yep, we fully intend to keep our fingertips moving.  LOL
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Hugs to you all  
Ethel

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