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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-09-01 12:40 PM

You're quite
a serene
fellow..
You speak as if you've been through it all,
having never fallen in love.
Somehow still it is your endless flaw,
that sends me shivering down a river,
so pure still you
may know it .. you may know
of your perfection a little too much.
As I begin to disagree you put your
index finger vertically across my lips and ask..
"Who are you to argue?"
I couldn't give you the key whilst there is
no lock, though
you're not sure yet of that, you're..
Still clueless to the fact that
I'm on to you..I know what you're thinking..
You mentioned your taste for the Geisha,
the ancient tea serving dance..
Crickets hum of the evening,
pretending that I'm
not listening..that I'm pretty apathetic
toward the world.
But all the time
thinking.. I couldn't possibly
live without your drawling.. and your
natural hair carressing your forehead.
Perhaps you have been through it all, though
never fallen in love..
maybe
that's the tragedy, the
melancholy that glimmers in your eyes.
You asked me if
I'd like to kiss..
As I did not decline, you smiled,
and turned your face away..
You were happy just knowing
I would.
And I
knowing
you wouldn't...
"Not yet", you tell me,
"drink
your tea instead".

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-01 12:42 PM

very very good write n read,,,,

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2003-09-01 01:34 AM

breathless...h

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-09-01 02:18 AM

You asked me if
I'd like to kiss..
As I did not decline, you smiled,
and turned your face away..
You were happy just knowing
I would.
And I
knowing
you wouldn't...
"Not yet", you tell me,
"drink
your tea instead".

I like this part especially, Meghan.

Hugs

Ethel

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2003-09-01 02:20 AM

Wow. thats good. A story of life an the undesirable but real.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Xtrasaucyvox
New Member

since 2003-09-01

Posts 2

5 posted 2003-09-01 03:33 AM

Beautiful lines, enjoyed

Joe Houck
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 324
california

6 posted 2003-09-01 04:07 AM

This is really great.
I've actually done that before.
Asking if I may have a kiss and them being contempt with just the approval.
drives chicks crazy. =)
Great stuff
Joe

"The worst vice is advice" (Al Pacino, devil's advocate)

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2003-09-01 09:20 AM

This is lovely.
Eric

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2003-09-01 09:26 AM

Anticipation is half the fun!

EA

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

9 posted 2003-09-01 04:33 PM

Have you read memoirs of a geisha? you must have.

I'll come back n comment when i can, more better. lol. i'm intoxicated. not a lauging matter. oh but it is.

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2003-09-01 07:36 PM

Kaoru

I like the way you drew this scene...made me smile.

gringakiwi
Member

since 2003-08-05

Posts 189

11 posted 2003-09-01 08:18 PM

Yes this reminds me of "Memoirs" as well. Lovely write, and so descriptive.

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

12 posted 2003-09-01 10:20 PM

ah

amore

you're in the right season for it... just don't let it seize you..

your talent is stretching Meg

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

13 posted 2003-09-01 10:36 PM

This was wonderful Meg, though I am never dissapointed when I choose to open one of your threads!

This was a masterpeice right down to the last line!

Tima

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

14 posted 2003-09-02 08:59 AM

This made me smile too....

You were happy just knowing
I would.
And I
knowing
you wouldn't...
"Not yet", you tell me,
"drink
your tea instead".

especially this, he sounds intriguing.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

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