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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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I sleep to dream of velveteen roses strewn about my feet By my face your finger feel lingering play where once you were O seamless dream caress thy place of threadbare soul a weathered race Be not afraid to pinch me please Otherwise just let me sleep [This message has been edited by littlewing (08-14-2003 07:43 PM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I can picture you standing in the elysium fields, with roses strewn about you. Jason |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile. such sweet dreams. I picture you as Lady Guinivere. (don't ask me to spell that right now--giggle) Love ya lady.  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - so a poem while you sleep, pinchy pinch... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
O seamless dream!!! Yes tweets~ This was real and plenty good! My oh my, you turned my head a couple times!!! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Mmhmm.. I love this. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Littlewing...I have bid myself sweet dreams more than one evening. This is a wonderful verse! Patricia |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Be not afraid to pinch me please in the white seconds before wakeup time, is when i feel his pinch.......then....... lovely with roses too, very nice, sue |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
May the dream goddess answer! Your yearning heart deserves roses ....  Love and hugs. Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Such lovely writing, Sue O seamless dream caress thy place of threadbare soul I enjoy your words more and more hugss M |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
You know, don't you? How very complete this is? How well it's written and how well it's read? Then, know it now. |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Littlewing, great write [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (08-16-2003 03:26 AM).] |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
bump [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (08-16-2003 03:28 AM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I can not tell you how many times I sit with fingers all ready to start typing a reply...then somebody walks into my office wanting something! I started to reply to this earlier this morning...sigh Anyway, I loved it and wanted you to know that. Susan |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This was beautiful. angelblueyes |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Life often is just awaking dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I saw so many of those fields in Ireland, especially in Tralee, Kilarnney, Dingle Bay, so many places! (kiss on cheek) I'm so happy to be reading your gorgeous poetry again, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A beautiful dream of a write, Dear Sue. May you have an endless supply of roses in your dreams--and in your waking hours!   Linda |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Sue- In case I've never told you before, I absolutely love your writing. You just seem to get better and better with every posting. Great Job. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jason, you are so sweet . . . thank you K - Lady Guinnevere . . . freaked me out - as long as I dont end up in the nunnery . . . thank you Bill . . . OUCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH thank you *smile* Thanks Bluesy . . . ahahahah tweets xxoo Thank you Kaoru! sounds nice, dont it? Thank you Patricia . . . I know every night and yet . . . Michele . . . yes then reality, I know prefer sleeping . . . thank you Thank you V! Margherita . . . you are so sweet to me - thank you Thank you so much Maureen, as I do yours Ed . . . to my rescue, as always thank you Thanks Mike - for both where are you? Thank you Susan . . . ahahah yes I know that one well Thank you angel . . . icey - God that was beautiful . . . thank you Noah! God, what a dream! Oh, to see what you have would truly make me happy thank you so much . . . is nice to see you back Thank you Linda . . . I need them and look! From an angel . . . *smile* Brad - NO you have NEVER EVER said that before to me LOL . . . thank you, you are much too sweet to me Thanks guys xxoo |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Great play here. Extremely creative and stealthy till the end. Nice write littlewing. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks poe for bringing this one back up xxoo |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
pinch me please, otherwise just let me sleep.Like asking the dream to pinch you. This write is very good lw. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Just wonderful my sweet friend! Thanks for sharing |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
I made a copy, really like this one. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - ok, I'm pinching... BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you poe, mann what a compliment, a thank you three times for the comments, the bump and for wanting to copy it Thank you Tima, where've you been, girl? Ok Bill, that is the second time you have pinched me in a week . . . *smile* I'm awake! Thanks guys xxoo |
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