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High Tea |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
High Tea Evening to a winter scene comes warm and full when with her palms night encircles porcelain. And with the moon arrives a look as though within its deep, rich crescent light pretends itself a bowl of distant, oriental china. Into this midst excuse a spoon, a common, rough barked branch of elm, to taste the sweetness of a dream, but spills the sugar for all to see. RMW [This message has been edited by RMW (08-14-2003 05:51 PM).] |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
very intriguing I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've been to High Tea... and this is your palette, at its best... this is lovely, Robert, and my eyes are pleased... as is my mind. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Snowflake and Sunshine........thank you both for taking a moment to read and comment. Your appreciation is .......... appreciated. Smiling. Bob |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RMW~ This is exquisitry in creative imagery~ Just lovely~ Nice to see you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I really enjoyed this high tea...lovely images so wonderful and warm. Patricia |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob This is so lovely!! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely and delicate, Bob. Great use of metaphor too, friend! Cor |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You've served it up perfectly~ How very nice~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Bob...this is simply beautiful...love the imagery.  Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." ~Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by vlraynes (08-16-2003 11:47 PM).] |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Marge, Patricia, Martie, Corinne, BluesSeranade and Vicky.....thank you all for the kind remarks. It is good to be sharing a bit, again. Bob |
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