Open Poetry #28 |
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Written On The Wind |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
Written On The Wind There is something written on the wind tonight I hear it singing my name Softest notes of loves' emote calling in gentle refrain~ Breezes blowing you about my mind sending sweet shivers up my spine I feel you on the wind this night Oh, babe ... can't wait until morning light~ You'll come borne on lightest breeze calling from among my memories Sending warmth on cradled caress Love, oh love ... moments like these, I love best~ ~Inspire cradled by the beautiful breezes blowing across the yard and also by my sweetie's singing~ *Bill, Love, oh love, this one's for you* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
We have some nice trade winds over here right now to cool down the ninety degree weather...15 to 25...I am embracing the sweet wind...James |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is so pretty & as usual I can feel your love for Bill in it. I know he loves it when you do this. Love, Betty |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh so beautiful...I hope to know these lovely words in my own life some day. Just lovely, Marge. Patricia |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge - now that must have been one nice breeze across the yard... BC |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Really a beautiful poem! Sometimes, it does seem there are new messages in the wind. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Marge, it's easy to see who this was for.. ![]() hugs M |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Very beautiful Marge. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
soft summer breezes murmer many romantic words,, beautifully penned,, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh, now Marge, this is just so cooling. A nice glass of iced tea or lemonade on the porch swing and I can't think of a more peaceful or restful scene. Love this ... huggles |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem was all the more special when I read of your inspiration! ![]() ![]() Linda |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, how soft and lovely Marge! Very nice indeed. hugs, Chris ![]() "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Very good marge a very soft warm wind touching all of our hearts bernie ![]() A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching, warm and soft |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...As always beautiful words flow from your mind just like the cool breeze flows across your yard. I'm sure Bill will love this. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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