Fame - The Maddening Beauty

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Open Poetry #28

Fame - The Maddening Beauty

MoniDaPoet
Member

since 2003-08-14

Posts 73
California, USA

0 posted 2003-08-14 02:44 PM

Ambiguous little flower
Floating on your sinister breeze
Where I land - I care not
I'll settle down with ease
Drink up all your liquor
Inhale your poison fumes
Float onto another
And so my story goes
On and On
Til there's no more waste in the world
And I am the last of my kind
Kind of maddening beauty - you forget
Then crave once more

I have only my genius to declare!

Poe_Pot_Pie
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

1 posted 2003-08-14 03:31 PM

i can't believe there are no comments! this is an excellent, quite original poem.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-08-14 05:03 PM

Hey now, I try to respond in between doing contracts and today was a mess!! LOL, dang work interferes all the time!

These lines:

"Ambiguous little flower
Floating on your sinister breeze
Where I land - I care not
I'll settle down with ease"

I love!!! The entire piece is great...but those lines....

Susan

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