Open Poetry #28 |
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Kind Hallucination |
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MoniDaPoet Member
since 2003-08-14
Posts 73California, USA ![]() |
Eyes follow his path Voices speak out in a breeze Pallid skin does scream Hiding behind the void Kneeling to no one Praying to a faceless deity While soul is racing Past options - the dagger Past deeds - the hand Son of chemical anguish I shall fervently pray You find a kind hallucination And never return |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Hey!!! I loved this one also!! Keep writing! Susan |
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MoniDaPoet Member
since 2003-08-14
Posts 73California, USA |
Thank you, Susan. I sure you're much too kind. |
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Great images! Love the title and its use in the poem. Well done. |
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