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TWENTY OR LESS...#143

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2003-08-14 10:35 AM

TWENTY OR LESS…#143

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon

profoundly anesthetized

spirit becomes
a statue

conscious of two
bitter gulps

its end

and

you’re married

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-08-15 12:01 PM

LOL Man you must be talking about marriage. I liked the way you described it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2003-08-15 12:25 PM

I gotta cheer that one...

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-08-15 12:27 PM

I will spare you the details of my wedding day, but? Let's just say it took a few more than "two bitter gulps" for me...

and no, your more serious message was not lost on me. sigh.

Can you write me a divorce in a twenty or less?

Enjoyed this more than my own ceremony.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-08-15 12:28 PM

hmmmm.....

made me laugh, knowingly
M

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2003-08-15 01:14 PM

the_loner_23:

  That's one interpretation...

passing shadows:  Bottom's up...

serenity blaze...  Thank you -- So much for ceremonies...  (I obliged your request).

Maureen:  indeed...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

6 posted 2003-08-15 02:30 PM

I hear you in this one.Had a couple of bitter moments myself.Oh well, such is the joys of life.
angelbueyes

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

7 posted 2003-08-15 05:36 PM

Crystal: Life is the ultimate theater...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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