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Open Poetry #28

pain cost $10.25 a fifth-senryu

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-08-14 02:22 AM

I felt the last words
you had ever said to me
every day for years

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (08-14-2003 02:29 AM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-08-14 02:23 AM

loud and clear

well done

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-08-14 02:41 AM

WOAH WOAH WOOOOAH

I'm so giddy about this I can't even begin to describe how amazing it is..

I'm saving it.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-08-14 07:49 AM

You brought the poem to the title,
and the title to the poem.
Well done Jason!

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2003-08-14 08:47 AM

Well done.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2003-08-14 09:41 AM

Ouch!

That hurts, but it's what poetry's all about. Well done.

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2003-08-14 07:29 PM

just a quiet hug, Jason.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-08-14 07:34 PM

contemplating how you can read my very thoughts . . .
*smile*
xxoo

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2003-08-14 10:44 PM

Jason - please use any words you wish for that bridge. Wishing you well, and my best to you...

BC

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