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Bard of The Park
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Bard of The Park |
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MoniDaPoet Member
since 2003-08-14
Posts 73California, USA 
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Straining with hopeful eyes Listening with open ears Seeking trails of disrupted leaves Amid winter elements - one can exist bitterly Abandoned amongst untrustworthy trees Bard of the park Possessor of tattered robes and dreams Strong - the stench of wine Weak - the sense to be Even in hopeless places Words of genius seem to stream How I seek my kindred father Still, too many sighs plaguing me No sign of my Bard He's off to another way home |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
interesting way with words you have, Monica can't quite put my finger on it, but good stuff |
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MoniDaPoet Member
since 2003-08-14
Posts 73California, USA |
Thank you. I wrote this after a trip to NYC. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Still, too many sighs plaguing me" Yep..story of my life as well... See what I find when I go hunting? Excellent writing.. Susan |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very nicely done. The kind of write that's a joy to find ~wranx |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I knew a poet like this, Moni. He had a home for a time, and access to a computer. He said that folks like him were never meant to meet people like me. His words were pure, untainted by the everyday world. Thanks for reminding me of him with this lovely write! Core |
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