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Open Poetry #28

It rained. We walked...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-08-14 12:54 PM

It rained. We walked. Your hair
was getting wet.
I breathed its scent. We shared
a cigarette.

God, politics or Hermann Hesse, --
I loved your voice.
We were together. I was blessed
and I rejoiced.

I held your hand. How fragile
was your glove!
I was naïve and I imagined
this was love...

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

[This message has been edited by Master (08-14-2003 02:22 AM).]

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

1 posted 2003-08-14 12:59 PM

I enjoyed your poem alot was simple yet interesting

Julie

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-08-14 02:27 AM

ain't it just like that?

sigh

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

3 posted 2003-08-15 03:44 PM

I like this, Master. It's tender with hints of sadness. I've always liked your work.

Core

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-08-15 03:47 PM

Like this...you can hope its love...James

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-08-15 03:56 PM

This was good with a touch of sadness.It might be love.
angelblueyes

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2003-08-15 03:59 PM

a perfect line..."I was naïve and I imagined
this was love..."

nice to see your word
Maureen

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