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What Then?
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What Then? |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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What Then? if you found me some afternoon just here dressed this way with nothing else to do but love you if you found me standing or maybe sitting content with just the sight of you if you found me I mean exactly now this moment what then? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Me? Well i'd feel awkward but flattered..grins great write Ed |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Interesting piece, very much provoked thinking  well doneJulie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lol@Raph yes Ed...very good piece...made me think |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I had such a good response... honest! *G* But Aenimal's had me laughing so much I choked on my coffee... so anything I say now is written with diminished capacity. *G* with nothing else to do but love you if you found me standing or maybe sitting content with just the sight of you I think anyone with even the remotest interest (which does, of course, except Aenimal, thank heavens LOL)would know she'd found treasure... and answer "what then?" with "forever, at least" *S* This definitely provokes one to think about what's really important... excellent write! *S* |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i would pull you into the shade of me |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ed~ You invite possibilities to come play in my mind~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Love Aenimal's reply it threw me into silly laughter. What The? Good question. May lead to romantic interludes. Good one Bon-Bon  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...Such an open and vulnerable heart would be hard to resist.  |
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