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Open Poetry #28

Someone…..(for Kaoru)

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-03 04:31 AM

Someone…..(for Kaoru)

salty sounds
pouring down
someone
sold you
a faulty dream
I know
I have slept
in those sheets
where loneliness
was a song
sang in
a voice alone
but someone else
hears you
yes your song
is heard
and dreams
open eyes to
a different day
where the only
thing that pours
is someone new
you

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (08-03-2003 04:35 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-08-03 05:17 AM

beautiful

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-08-03 02:25 PM

h..you're a doll red you know that? sure she'll l#ve this

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-08-03 02:58 PM

So very thoughtful...

thank you!

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-08-03 03:36 PM

I do love it,
verily..
And I could say the same for you,
we have shared sheets.
Now we must find something warmer,
similarity.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2003-08-26 04:07 AM

"someone
sold you
a faulty dream"

Oh yes...I know that dream...

Such a wonderfully caring write, Helen.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

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