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Butterfly Thoughts |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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Butterfly Thoughts Butterfly thoughts flutter in blue midnight A creature of day soars in soft moonlight I claim capture of she now in quill of net Lest I tremble not of fear and regret Held close under my lens I shall magnify To examine she now in a sigh of why With her gentle spread of night, she reveals My wish a butterfly’s soul to steal Yet I release she now, a thought set free With surrender I find inside of me To now allow a poet’s pen to ride With a silk of flow and a smooth of glide [This message has been edited by Patricia (08-02-2003 10:19 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Patricia~ Well now ... isn't this just a beautiful morning flutter ? YEP it is !! If it has wings ... I love it !  Loverly~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your flutterbys need my lilies to land on, and take a break!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Patricia! Your poet's pen truly does "ride with a silk of flow and a smooth of glide."  Write on; write often!  Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Patricia Your favor flies high. Enjoyed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Patricia - butterfly wings will I ride on, to flutter a heart while reading this beauty of a write... BC |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Simply beautiful. Eric |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice read n write,,,  |
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Poe_Pot_Pie Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107Canada |
I enjoyed this. Butterfly are such simple creatures who could teach us all a thing about living. Good Job! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
 Ah, the unbearable lightness of being ... Beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You had me from the title on... lovely winged rhymes poetess Patricia. the moth is keeping this one. "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Patricia, I read this early this morning when I was on the internet. I really thought I had left a reply. I see that I didn't though. I think it's because I went looking for a butterfly to put on here and got sidetracked. LOL Anyway, I'm back...without a butterfly. HaHa!! I'm going to keep this delightful poem, though, so I will always have a butterfly close by. Thanks.  Hugs Ethel |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Wow. Captivating, just like the butterfly herself. Mesmorized with her in flight...the way these words took off, and soared into fancy my heart. Very pretty!!!!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Musical notes to this one Patricia... pretty write. TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Yet I release she now, a thought set free With surrender I find inside of me To now allow a poet’s pen to ride With a silk of flow and a smooth of glide they do have a way of doing this to our pens dont they [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-02-2003 10:01 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Patricia, Oh my . . . this I do adore . . . and am claiming it as my very own! beautiful! xxoo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh my, this is absolutely wonderful... your writing Patricia reminds of a most talented poet who frequented these pages regularly...I miss reading him. I do believe he stops by from time to time. His name is Michael Anderson. I'd love for him to read you as well. here are a few links to his poems... /pip/Forum34/HTML/000439.html /pip/Forum34/HTML/000383.html Maree  fate is not just whose cooking smells good but which way the wind blows (Ani DiFranco) [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (08-03-2003 08:08 AM).] |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
A great thanks to you all for your replies! Maree, I just read Michael Anderson...thank you so very much for the compliment! Wow, he is an extremely talented poet. Now wouldn't it be wonderful if he shows up today! Love, Paticia |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Your poem and image are so very inspiring. I am sure I have commented on this earlier but it has disappeared. Maggie |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Patricia...I just love this. So glad I decided to go digging for treasures tonight. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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