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Open Poetry #28

I'm Falling

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-08-13 02:27 AM

I'm falling
My head is numb
slowly you kill me
with your smile
your eyes
you kill me with every word that leaves your mouth
I'm falling
falling to the ground
even though i know
you wont be there to catch me
you'll just leave me here
falling
always falling
always wishing
wishing you would see me
wishing i wasnt invisible
longing to be yours
i'm falling....

"so kiss me hard,
cause this will be the last time that i let you."
-D.C

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-08-13 02:30 AM

oooo, this is good...incredible feelings

minoune
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 87
Canada

2 posted 2003-08-13 07:59 AM

the invisible love... wow... good poem here..
i hope you meet one day...

minoune

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

3 posted 2003-08-13 08:40 AM

..exhale../\..a lyric poem; clear and sharp....yes..

../\..Spiros

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