Open Poetry #28 |
Time of the Month |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
paperweights above me, panoramas of grey form the bigtop, pressing trees, they hold me hostage, pastels do not breathe now, it is all enclosure - the storms are held within, there is neither pain nor delirium, cried over rivers cannot bear me, cotton candy is too sweet here, it only sings like a toothache, i am soothed in warm flannel, cradled in the charcoal rosebud, there is beauty in isolation, nocturnal, i am calm here |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Ahh..yes. Do we ever.. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"i am soothed in warm flannel" mmmm, this immediately brings up a feeling of comfort There's nothing like a good fight with a horse to put your problems into perspective |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice...very nice Michele |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
there is beauty in isolation there is indeed enjoyed... Maree fate is not just |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, kauro we do, don't we thanks dix sky..love the comfort of the flannel maree.thanks glad you know this too |
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PassionandFun Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 60 |
Yes, everyone needs a place to feel comfortable but its sad when the day is "darker" than the night.... Jeff |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
cotton candy is too sweet here, it only sings like a toothache, ~ I love the way you play with words! EA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michele - now which time is that of I ponder. Lovely write... BC |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I do know the feeling, of a great write...this is it |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Never having experienced the Time of the Month except with denial I can only imagine the thoughts that must go thru your head. If it was my time of the month I dont think I would deny...... |
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