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Sunshine State |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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saccharine smiles, this state is sugarcoated, look at their costumes - they wont even autumnize no gold or crimson will adorn them, they are stranded for now, at time's mercy like the rest of us, victims of the veil between real love and illusion see how their green palms enclose, along sculpted gardens and golden gated communities, from whom do they fence themselves in, these folk? the reaper will find his way through to them, they are just temporary occupants dipping in an illusionary fountain [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-12-2003 09:32 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - yep, they seem to live in an illusion... BC |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Mish simply amazing writing..i adore this |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
You gotta love the sunshine state....  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
the reaper will find his way through to them, very good lines,, enjoyed the read,, |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michele, this is a very well-written poem.....  Hugs  Ethel |
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