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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2003-08-11 01:34 PM

Dark Of Light
~*Marge Tindal*~

The dark of me is equal to the light
side by side we travel
Dark becomes me most
when light begins to unravel
In darkness I am cloaked
in light minus reflection
Therefore I am my own shadow
that cannot step away
Gingerly hop-of-scotching
hoping to reach home
perhaps alone
Yet as I turn to see
where I've been
I see light
chasing my shadow
I pause ...
hoping it will catch me~

*Inspired by the loveliest of friends*
Thank you, Pat

~Regards to you too, dear lady~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-08-11 01:39 PM

This was good.I loved the way you used dark and light here

angelblueyes

Betty
Senior Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

2 posted 2003-08-11 04:59 PM

I love the way you did this & the peom is great.
Betty

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2003-08-11 10:10 PM

I love this!

And especially this, which is as fine a turn of the poet's wheel as there is.....

"I see light
chasing my shadow
I pause ...
hoping it will catch me~"

Yes....I find myself looking back too...maybe if I pause for just a bit.....

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-08-11 10:18 PM

With equal parts of dark and light, it sounds to me like you are gray! lol

Actually, you appear quite balanced! I enjoyed the yin-yanginess of this write!

Linda

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2003-08-11 11:28 PM

Dear Marge: Very unusual format and poem also! Thanks for the link!

Love
Betty Lou

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gringakiwi
Member

since 2003-08-05

Posts 189

6 posted 2003-08-11 11:39 PM

Marge
You always write the cutest poems which give me a fuzzy feeling all day. Great write!
Connie

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-08-12 09:57 AM

Marge, I sent you an e-mail through PiP from a friend. Let me know if you receive it, OK?

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

8 posted 2003-08-12 10:16 AM

Ahhh I see the light

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

9 posted 2003-08-12 11:02 AM

I love this poem's 'take me lightly' or 'go deeper' persona. Well written. Great visual!

Rf

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2003-08-12 04:14 PM

I started highlighting my favorite lines... and copied the poem. *S* This is beautiful, Marge... as is your inspiration. *S*

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

11 posted 2003-08-12 10:56 PM

Hello Marge

This was so very beautiful and indeed, very inspiring.

"Our friendships are the structures
that hold us in place when
our world threatens to dissolve"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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