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lilythumbs
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0 posted 2003-08-12 10:29 AM




Your future lies
before you like
freshly fallen snow
so be careful where
you walk for ever step will show.


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1 posted 2003-08-12 10:32 AM


Lily, welcome to Passions!  This is a lovely first post...and I have a feeling you're going to like it here a lot.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

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2 posted 2003-08-12 04:17 PM


Even those where you're going in circles. *S* I like this very much... welcome to Passions! *S*
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3 posted 2003-08-26 11:53 PM




(smiles) So very true, dearest friend, in this comes the reminder of the golden notion that we are responsible for our own actions so may we walk carefully or we'll be bound to slip on the ice! (big hugggsssssss) This is true wisdom, sweet friend, wonderful debut, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fantastic poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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4 posted 2003-08-27 12:02 PM


Wow, this is great!  I love the image; it put me right into winter (my favorite season).

Welcome to PiP!!!!  Enjoy.

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5 posted 2003-08-27 12:05 PM


Welcome to Passions In Poetry. I really like your first post and hope to read more of your work. There's a lot of wisdom in these few words.
Hugs  
Ethel

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6 posted 2003-08-27 07:44 AM


These are wise words, Lily - Looking forward to more...
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7 posted 2003-08-27 07:47 AM


lilythumbs
Welcome and a great start. Enjoyed

LeeJ
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8 posted 2003-08-27 08:38 AM


very much enjoyed, brought a tender smile to my heart...good jobber...and welcome, looking forward to reading more of your lovely writes.
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9 posted 2003-08-27 11:35 AM




This is a lovely first post !!
Welcome to Passions !
Enjoy yourself here.
Chris

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10 posted 2003-08-27 11:53 AM


Welcome to Passions, Lily!  Wise words indeed!
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11 posted 2003-08-27 12:25 PM


Greetings lilythumbs!

To paraphrase an old Chinese proverb . . .
"May you find this an interesting place."

Your words suggest this to me:

Footsteps

A wind will come to blow
as always, don't you know
and nothing will it show
but newly fallen snow

glider

[This message has been edited by wandering glider (08-27-2003 06:58 PM).]

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