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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-08-12 10:29 AM



He is writing his best,
always does
when I am no longer needed
or wanted
and am just another toss-away.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
1 posted 2003-08-12 10:35 AM


Hmmm...  "just another toss-away"...  Don't know about that...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-08-12 10:45 AM


well Mark, the first toss-away  was devastating enough...trashed over 30 years of emotions, memories and attachments.

The second one didn't take as long, nor collect as much, but the damage is all the same.

You know that other cliche'(I hate them) that if something happens once it may not be your fault..but when it continues to happen, maybe you should look inside yourself instead of finding fault elsewhere?

Guess the fault lies in me...and how I handle myself...and I am not sure there is a teacher out there who can "learn" me any better.

M
  

Robert Frazier
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3 posted 2003-08-12 10:45 AM


hey, look what a beautiful poem I found tossed away!

Rf

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2003-08-12 10:52 AM


Hey You..are you following me???

if so, thanks

a ~smile ~ a day
gives me pleasure.


M

NewEnglandlazurlu
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5 posted 2003-08-12 11:03 AM


Dear lady, I would hardly call you a toss-a-way!

I'm sure it wasn't your fault. Hang in there!

Hugs, Marti

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-08-12 11:05 AM


I've hung way too long..I even have the  marks on my neck to prove it...I had to cut my own self loose.

M

QjQ
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7 posted 2003-09-06 09:51 PM


enjoyed the write n read,,,

    

SmartChick
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8 posted 2003-09-06 10:17 PM


Awwww Maureen, I understand your feelings here. Just remember, it is his loss. Hugs, my friend.
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9 posted 2003-09-07 11:07 AM


Some folks say little with many words...
you've said so much with a few.
May I never be such as they,
but rather more like you.

And for myself, I won't be one
who takes love, then departs;
I hope to be a writer who
completes each verse he starts.

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angelblueyes
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10 posted 2003-09-07 07:14 PM


Dear lady, they are a fool to have tossed you away.Remember that you will always shine bright and they will see that they messed up.
Crystal

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
11 posted 2003-09-07 07:39 PM


nakdthoughts - you never would be a toss away...

BC

Local Rebel
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12 posted 2003-09-07 11:24 PM


one man's trash
another man's treasure!



like throwing away a Rembrandt...

just wait till you hit E-Bay M!


passing shadows
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13 posted 2003-09-08 02:17 AM


M, I have to agree with everyone above here
suthern
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14 posted 2003-09-08 04:24 PM


In honesty, I tell you this
Lady M... the loss is his.

Cpat Hair
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15 posted 2003-09-08 04:28 PM


hard to imagine you tossed away... hard indeed...


gemjop
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16 posted 2003-09-08 07:18 PM


I was sure i had replied to this!

well, know i've read it many times.

and know, no one worthy of you, would ever dare to throw away our nakdthoughts! we will never throw you away.

another keeper...ooooh makes me feel like hitting him!!!!!

Instant karma's gonna get you.

nakdthoughts
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17 posted 2003-09-09 11:10 AM


I thought this thing had slipped down and was tucked away...

was one of those moments...
thank you, all

and truthfully, I'd toss me away too


M

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