Open Poetry #28 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
He is writing his best, always does when I am no longer needed or wanted and am just another toss-away. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hmmm... "just another toss-away"... Don't know about that... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well Mark, the first toss-away was devastating enough...trashed over 30 years of emotions, memories and attachments. The second one didn't take as long, nor collect as much, but the damage is all the same. You know that other cliche'(I hate them) that if something happens once it may not be your fault..but when it continues to happen, maybe you should look inside yourself instead of finding fault elsewhere? Guess the fault lies in me...and how I handle myself...and I am not sure there is a teacher out there who can "learn" me any better. M |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
hey, look what a beautiful poem I found tossed away! Rf |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey You..are you following me??? if so, thanks a ~smile ~ a day gives me pleasure. M |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Dear lady, I would hardly call you a toss-a-way! I'm sure it wasn't your fault. Hang in there! Hugs, Marti |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I've hung way too long..I even have the marks on my neck to prove it...I had to cut my own self loose. M |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed the write n read,,,
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Maureen, I understand your feelings here. Just remember, it is his loss. Hugs, my friend. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Some folks say little with many words... you've said so much with a few. May I never be such as they, but rather more like you. And for myself, I won't be one who takes love, then departs; I hope to be a writer who completes each verse he starts. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Dear lady, they are a fool to have tossed you away.Remember that you will always shine bright and they will see that they messed up. Crystal |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - you never would be a toss away... BC |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
one man's trash another man's treasure! like throwing away a Rembrandt... just wait till you hit E-Bay M! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
M, I have to agree with everyone above here |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
In honesty, I tell you this Lady M... the loss is his. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hard to imagine you tossed away... hard indeed... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I was sure i had replied to this! well, know i've read it many times. and know, no one worthy of you, would ever dare to throw away our nakdthoughts! we will never throw you away. another keeper...ooooh makes me feel like hitting him!!!!! Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I thought this thing had slipped down and was tucked away... was one of those moments... thank you, all and truthfully, I'd toss me away too M |
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