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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-09-08 11:59 AM


Opaque

I am a silent shadow
my reach spread thin
seeding tomorrow's hope
.
.
.
Ties

I see my world through the black lace of you

a stirring touch each time I shed my days

and step into the darkness
.
.
.
.
and I thought...

how much more
can there be

when is the bottom the bottom
and there is
nowhere else to go
but up
.
.
.
Mine

the bees smelled my fear
stayed away, my sweetness gone
my sting worse than theirs
.
.
.
Left

You never heard my cries,
you never wiped my tears

I've left it
in poetry's hands

all those doubts
all those fears...

M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
1 posted 2003-09-08 12:11 PM


WynterGal~
As usual, your 'little bits' add up to one powerfully beautiful presentation of your heart~

Just lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-09-08 12:25 PM



Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
3 posted 2003-09-08 01:10 PM


You never heard my cries,
you never wiped my tears

I've left it
in poetry's hands

all those doubts
all those fears...

Oh yes...exactly!!  What else do we have...what other choice were we given?

Susan

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
4 posted 2003-09-08 06:06 PM




wow, maureen, you captured me with every word. I read it over and over.

A keeper.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
5 posted 2003-09-08 06:38 PM


You so touched me with this one.
Crystal

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
6 posted 2003-09-09 11:14 AM


Marge, thank you

I have been thinking  of a year ago and how much fun we all had...
hugsss
M

Thanks Dixie
    


Susan, there are choices...I just seem to make the wrong ones.

gemjop, glad you enjoyed thank you for your kind words.



Crystal
  

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