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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Opaque I am a silent shadow my reach spread thin seeding tomorrow's hope . . . Ties I see my world through the black lace of you a stirring touch each time I shed my days and step into the darkness . . . . and I thought... how much more can there be when is the bottom the bottom and there is nowhere else to go but up . . . Mine the bees smelled my fear stayed away, my sweetness gone my sting worse than theirs . . . Left You never heard my cries, you never wiped my tears I've left it in poetry's hands all those doubts all those fears... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (09-08-2003 12:04 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterGal~ As usual, your 'little bits' add up to one powerfully beautiful presentation of your heart~ Just lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
You never heard my cries, you never wiped my tears I've left it in poetry's hands all those doubts all those fears... Oh yes...exactly!! What else do we have...what other choice were we given? Susan |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
 wow, maureen, you captured me with every word. I read it over and over. A keeper. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You so touched me with this one.  Crystal |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Marge, thank you I have been thinking of a year ago and how much fun we all had... hugsss M Thanks Dixie  Susan, there are choices...I just seem to make the wrong ones. gemjop, glad you enjoyed thank you for your kind words. Crystal |
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