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Flimsy Persistance
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Flimsy Persistance |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Sweet smells surround her succubi Weak of persistance Its only pure desire and Simply a heart fragranted in hope Tease and taunt A darling in disguise If only Cupid could site in his bow Draw string and set freedom A make believe wish Truly desire Esteem dear earnest challange She drains the very energy that provides the ability Strong is her pull A body of gravity Day dreamer Its only desire Fallen No way out One captured in eternal and isolate And again, with no way out ____________________________________________ Ive never done one like this before, well kinda. Any way let me know how it is. a trickle of music from a well |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
It feels kind of like i just dropped a bomb on my usual work. GIS |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty cool...liked the format, and the theme is something I think we all know makes me want to experiment with my formats |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
cool |
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