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Open Poetry #28

Foolishly I Had Believed

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2003-08-11 06:53 AM

Foolishly I Had Believed

My fault for being foolish
My heart taken and used
I believed in his excuses
Until my heart felt bruised

My fault for being enticed
My heart was lured away
Desire upon heartstrings
With his promises to stay

My fault for being gullible
My heart never prepared
I opened  to persuasion
Having thought he cared

My fault for being tricked
My heart easy decieved
Infatuated by lovable lies
Foolishly  I had believed

My fault for being trusting
My heart wanted to keep
Why I still longingly yearn
Depths of love are deep

Hope©2003

minoune
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since 2003-08-10

Posts 87
Canada

1 posted 2003-08-11 07:08 AM

wonderful poem. I felt your pain as i was reading it... Loving completely , but yet seeing that love not returned the same, or that it was abused is a hurt we never forget.
I hope than each day brings you the chance to meet someone who will give you the love you deserve... Just believe.. it can and will happen...

minoune

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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2 posted 2003-08-11 02:54 PM

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-08-12 01:29 AM

Hope, you may have your graphics/smilies disabled...in the above reply, there is a smily hugging another smily...I don't think that it will let you post a blank reply...you gotta put something, even if only a dot

good write, and you know I can relate

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2003-08-12 01:33 AM

Thank you minuone for your caring thoughts

Hope

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2003-08-12 01:36 AM

Awww Dix thanks for the much needed hugs and smiles , I finally noticed them , I think my computer was going slow .... much like me sometimes LOL
Hope

dhicks03
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since 2002-12-26

Posts 267
Missouri,USA

6 posted 2003-08-12 02:32 AM

From a male perspective, nice write. I could feel your loss. Keep up the hope.
Dennis

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