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The One
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The One |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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The One You are the one I’ve never met, the voice I’ve never heard, I know you not by your face or your eyes but already I am in love with the very thought of you. You are the friend, the lover I have never touched, yet, you touch my heart by existing in this world. And, I know that one day you will hold me with patient embrace and whisper kindred dialects that only our souls can hear. All the pieces of lifetimes before shall fall into perfect place and the moon shall weep in smiles for a love story written in the stars by God's very hand. Yes, I know you beyond forever and a day and I must confess that I shall love you at first glance. By Melissa Long-Monette [This message has been edited by Honeybee (08-11-2003 10:28 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Well hey I only requested this what a billion years go? Bout time you got your butt in gear..awesome write. Hope is the key, as hard as it is to believe sometimes. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...you will hold me with patient embrace and whisper kindred dialects that only our souls can hear. ~*~ Now, this is the song of heart. To think that all surpasses the need for words themselves, and to listen to the eyes speak, the touch of hands, the inner whispers even when the voice is silent... ah little one...this SPOKE to me. |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Wonderful poem, Melissa. I too wait with hope for "the one". This one reached me today... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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minoune Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 87Canada |
there are times when silence is golden and when two people are in love, silence speaks .. wonderfully done... minoune |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Melissa...a wonderful write from a heart just bursting to love and be loved. Good to see you so hopeful. ~Summertime Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderfully written...at one time I felt this way...so I do understand. *s M |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is the triumph of hope over reality, and I pray it turns true for you. Beautifully done. Samdra |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
the mere imagination of such a soulful connection is at once; intensely personal and chillingly passionate...thanks for sharing it so beautifully! Rf |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Melissa, I love all your poetry, but it's good to see you write a poem full of hope, love and promises again.  |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I sigh an awe... Breathtaking. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I believe I read this entire piece with mouth agape in total awe! Incredible. Gives me hope he exists! Patricia |
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