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Your Smile |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Won't you light my daydreams with your smile? Shine it down upon me for a precious little while For when you smile, my world is right The clouds all disappear And then I know there's nothing left to fear... One single smile from you can change my day The raindrops feel like silk, and softly wash my cares away I bask inside your sunlit glow That warms my soul within Your smile is where my fantasy begins... You can have my all, forevermore My only wish is that each day you'll love me as before And in return I'll give you days of magic Gypsy style Which mirror back your tantalising smile... Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I love smiles... They are as bright as sunshine. And some smiles are even brighter! “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
If everyone would smile wouldn't it be a better world. Loved the poem Maggie |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Awww, Such tender words. Very sweet to read. What a dear person the one of your affections must be.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"The raindrops feel like silk, and softly wash my cares away." Lovely, lovely...James |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
One single smile from you can change my day The raindrops feel like silk, and softly wash my cares away I bask inside your sunlit glow That warms my soul within Your smile is where my fantasy begins... What a beautiful poem, Sunny. I like your new picture, too.  Hugs  Ethel |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Smiles are so precious!  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely and I can relate much to this ... Love, Margherita  |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Such warmth in this piece ... lovely. Enjoyed |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi El_Campeador, and I agree...some smiles are dazzling, to the eyes and the heart! Thank you! ~S~ Hi Maggie, and how right you are there. A smile can break the ice, and break down most barriers between people, even if they can't speak the same language! Thank you...~S~ Hi SharaRose, and oh yes...I am blessed with one who smiles at me, and with me...what a joy he is! Thank you...~S~ Hi James, and I liked that thought so much, too...there's a lot of rain in England! Thank you, my friend...~S~ Hi Ethel, and thank you, dear friend...it's just a good day to think good thoughts!! (I appreciate you noticing the pic...I wasn't sure if the world was ready for the actual me!!! LOL!!! ~S~ Hi Elizabeth, and yes, I agree...a simple smile can create magic! Thank you so much...~S~ Hi Margherita, and I always appreciate knowing that a friend enjoyed my humble efforts!! Thank you...~S~ Hi Janette, and I am very happy that the warmth came through...a smile should project that nice feeling, so I'm glad it happened that way when you read!! Thank you, too...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I just love that "gypsy style" spirit in you, dearest friend, yay, and I know as that smile continues to shine in your hart, love will always glow warm and true! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, dearest friend, I've missed you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunnyone - oh yes gypsy woman, a smile will do it.... BC |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Noah, and it's so good to see you again, lil bro!! I've missed you too, and it's wonderful to have you stop by for a bit here! Thank you...~S~ Hi BC, and I've enjoyed writing about smiles here! It's the one thing in life that's free, your very own, and you can give away and still have more!! Thank you...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
I LOVED THIS SOO MUCH! I just started comming here and never have read any of your poems! but i love this! and i will be checking out more! Tequilia |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - smiles, nothing like them to start and end the day... BC |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
loved it! |
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