Open Poetry #28 |
Elusion |
dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Eyes of an Angel Smile Looking through me She sings Eyes of a Scorpion Trace Her every move Held captive Admiration Unnoticed She cannot see the shadow For the darkness . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very very intrigued michael........... |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
I have a passion for Tolkien [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (08-12-2003 12:36 AM).] |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Simple yet Beautiful. Thanks ! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey I was thinking that very same thing like Arweyn and Strider . . . Am I right? Nice to see you posting again missed you here Mike xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooo..wow |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
funny thing about eyes and darkness...I can see a black bug crawling across a black floor even in the darkness... shadows are easy to find...for me M |
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