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Maybe I'll Foolishly Divide...
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Maybe I'll Foolishly Divide... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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So you say, you want to save the world. From what, fool, yourself? I've seen you. Lashing out as if there were nothing to catch here. As if it weren't a bore in the first place. So? You've still got barely anything to say. And I'm sure you're going to read my words the wrong way. Maybe, fool, maybe..this isn't even real, maybe..it's not even about you anymore. But included in my harsh words is something sweet ..without the bitter taste, don't you see? Usually, all the horrid things I pen are really about me. My inabilities to voice myself correctly, deep down my words make sense but, they come out all disorganized and in my selfish attempt to sway my own anger I've.. I've run away from what made me whole. Perhaps in this lifetime I'll realize, I'll understand.. That clenching desperately onto a childish love, or dream..is what kept me choking to begin with. Maybe we'll look at the sky together one night, even though we're far apart.. Maybe we'll make the same wish on the same star.. I'll divide the sky.. the only place I know where to start.. is all over again. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
sometimes "all over again" is the best place to start...enjoyed your words |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"Maybe, fool, maybe..this isn't even real, maybe..it's not even about you anymore." very cool lines all over again is a great place to start |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maybe we'll look at the sky together one night, even though we're far apart.. Maybe we'll make the same wish on the same star.. Kaoru, though this is sad to me, this part is so pretty. Hope things will be better real soon. Hugs  Ethel (This is falling down the page fast, so I thought I'd give it another boost)  |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
One night, one star ... one wish. Doesn't sound divided at all, sounds inspiring! Deep thoughts well expressed, thanks for the read. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
simply amazing meg |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"Usually, all the horrid things I pen are really about me." ...helen |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is a terrific outpour of emotion--and I'm not even sure if it's anger, but just a blunt matter of fact presentation of "how it is"... wonderful work you. |
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