Open Poetry #28 |
Harvest Moon |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Stiff, the winds of north upon the western flowing plain. Charismatically bending the grains, the limbs of the apple, the vine of the gourd. Squeaking shudders, moans of the wind mill, occasional slam of a forgotten door beyond the rustic beauty of a farmland home. Sun’s set shall sprinkle the heaven’s in a universe of twinkle.And as the hens nestle upon the egg, the dozing rooster awaits the peak of dawn. Smells of bacon, biscuits, red-eye gravy intermingled with the roasted bean perking rhythmically upon the generations old iron stove stoked by glowing logs of oaken hue. A wandering wisp of smoke awaits the swirl of the northern breath. The hound huddles beneath a rickety porch once haven to countless fantasy wars and hide and seek.... And as the cock crows the waking light, a shudder drawn open shows all of God’s glory... Awaiting the harvest moon.... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks alot Barry, I'm so hungry now and have no food |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I love it! The sights and smells and sounds... all of it! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful scenery Barry. It feels as if I had visited. Love, Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry..I could taste it, smell it, hear it...see it!! All of it!! Wonderful...love this, I do! ~Summertime Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Barry, This is wonderful...you brought my senses alive with each word. Patricia |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Barry, I was right there......smelling, tasting, and seeing..... Goodness, you're a good writer. I sure was glad to see you here today. Hugs to you, my friend Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, Dear Barry, you almost have me wishing summer away so that I can experience all of the joys of the next Harvest Moon! You're in fine form with this wonderful write. Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful write once again Barry. hugs,Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mmmm, now I'm hungry! and wanting for a storm |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Barry, thank you for taking me home to a time long ago. This was a wonderful write with such descriptive language. I enjoyed it so much. hugs, Marti |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I grew up with such a stove... and such a porch. *S* Thank you for the smiles... I liked this very much! *S* |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This was great.You brought the sense, the sights, and the sounds all to life in your words. angelblueyes |
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