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Open Poetry #28

Surrounded

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

0 posted 2003-08-10 11:13 PM

People
all around me,
voices, eyes, intonations....
Rescue me, surround me with crowds
of you.

[This message has been edited by Ratleader (08-11-2003 09:00 AM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-08-10 11:42 PM

Ratleader - oh yes, do I know these thoughts...

BC

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

2 posted 2003-08-10 11:54 PM

Ahhh
Wouldn't that be nice!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-08-11 05:11 AM

would be nice, wouldn't it?

minoune
Member

since 2003-08-10

Posts 87
Canada

4 posted 2003-08-11 07:19 AM

what a wonderful way to tell someone you love and need them...very nice post

minoune

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

5 posted 2003-08-11 09:31 AM

A great poem, in a few words.

Jason

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2003-08-11 09:58 AM

indeed a lovely thought, when one can actually be surrounded by the one they love, even in a crowd...

Lauren~

The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2003-08-11 12:38 PM

What a respite you request. *S* Some crowds can be so chaotic... you're asked for a crowding of cherish. *S* Absolutely beautiful! *S*

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2003-08-11 12:49 PM

Ed...love what suthern said about a crowd of cherish...lots of meaning here in a few short words. That's good poetry...wish I could write it like that instead of going on and on...oops, like I seem to be doing now.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

9 posted 2003-08-11 01:17 PM

Short, but sweet.
angelblueyes

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