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Open Poetry #28

One More Rain

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

0 posted 2003-08-09 09:18 PM

One More Rain

I believe rarely righteously owns the best of me
Perhaps unworthy is what's holding my hand
Seems the path to a much kinder place to fall
Sifts through my fingers like delicate sands...

Always wading waters and so heart deep in it all
Uncertain of any storms I'm stepping on below
To find one more rain; one more season I drift through
But, how many times must I let you go...

Haven't I opened my arms a million times or two
Just for emptiness to fill what you couldn't do
And, since life hesitates to acknowledge true heart
I live with one more hard rain skies apart...

A simple sigh to the lie the world never did unfold
I'm just here in quiet proof of a story never told
And, I will watch as you walk away from this place
But, never really losing sight of the rain on your face...

I will gather what's left of a so broken day
Carrying the if only you didn't go away
Just one more rain with pain and an attempt at grace
But, never really losing sight of the rain on my face...

Sauni

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

1 posted 2003-08-09 09:21 PM

wow...i got lost in this =o)

I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away,
Live again, here forever, the spiral never ends. Godsmack

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-08-10 11:21 AM

Dear Saunni, this is beautiful even though sad. There is no rain, without sunshine breaking through again ...
Love, Margherita

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-08-10 11:31 AM

Oh Saunni, this is so sad. But, yes, it is
still very beautifully written. If this is
about you personally, I sincerely hope
that things are getting better with you.

Hugs

Ethel

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