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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-08-08 09:21 PM

You are running
right up my alley
picking a fight
I have fought before

it's that ageless
battle, that I
always win
while I lose

another piece
of myself

in the end
I could probably claim
victory, even as I felt
the loss

I will leave my essence
this time, at your door
as I win without winning
and your loss, becomes
noones gain

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (08-09-2003 04:12 PM).]

Lexia
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 111
Nowhere

1 posted 2003-08-08 09:24 PM

Very interesting. It seems like there is a story behind this somewhere.

Good work,
Alexia

You may only be one person to the world, but you may also be the world to one person.

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2003-08-08 11:19 PM

"I will leave my essence
this time, at your door
as I win without winning
and your loss, becomes
noones gain"

Great job!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-08-09 12:40 PM

I know this..thanks for writing it

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

4 posted 2003-08-09 12:45 PM

good to see you reflecting on both sides of the coin

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

5 posted 2003-08-09 09:20 PM

the quandry
well said

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-08-09 11:09 PM

'it's that ageless
battle, that I
always win
while I lose"

Oh Jason....oh my...those words right there...remind me of what marriage is like...man, am I tainted...LOL

I really enjoyed!

Susan C.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2003-08-10 01:03 PM

Lots to be said for this....

in the end
I could probably claim
victory, even as I felt
the loss

So true, we can choose to win,
I think that's half the battle.

Nice work Jason~

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

8 posted 2003-08-10 01:18 PM

Well said.

Enjoyed the read.

~Tier

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

9 posted 2003-08-16 11:55 AM

Sounds an awful lot like livin', don't it?

Good thoughts...nicely done

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-08-16 10:15 PM

always always losing what we want to win and winning what we should have lost . . .
yep, for sure Jason
xxoo

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