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For Tonight (Just a touch)
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For Tonight (Just a touch) |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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If you can catch the salt of my tears touch the sway of my hips and taste the want on my lips I will be yours for tonight If you can run your hands down the span of my back and not care what I lack I am for you tonight If you brush the hair from my face graze my essense with your eyes and don't care for long goodbyes I need you for tonight If you can take only what I give and make me once again feel whole then I will gently touch your soul for tonight |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, I love this! Yes indeedy. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, yesssssssssssssssssssssssss *S* But when you find someone like that... you want tonight to be every night. *S* I love this, Susan! *S* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh how you made my night!!! Susan, you are a wonderfully honest poet and your talent is unsurmised. This read like a dream that lasts. Thank you.... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Susan...This lovely poem goes down like smooth wine. Enjoyed very much the reality within your words...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (08-08-2003 11:33 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
susan, beautiful writing, love..just beautiful.. sent my heart racing.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
You all are too, too kind! Thank you so much for all the wonderful replies! They made me feel all warm and fuzzy! Hugs and kisses to all! Susan |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
but then there is sun light a thoughtful capture of an emotion that bounds all hearts |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my..I am so pleased I didn't miss this keeper. Wonderful...honest...open. ~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Rebel~Your words are not only beautiful, but also so close to the truth in my life right now....thank you. Nancy~Thank you, I am so glad you liked it. Susan |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Susan - this is very tempting, all of these things and more... BC |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Bill, You always know just what to say! Thank you. Susan |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
wonderful and well penned,,, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, moments are brief and once lived, only remain in the heart though they slip from mind |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
If I weren't ball and chained I may think more on this but its too dangerous..  Good piece got me thinking |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Dixie, True..the good, the bad and the ugly...you don't forget any...thank you for reading and responding. Dan, Ball and Chain?? LOL Always hated that expression and "the old lady" ....thank you for the compliment..I always look forward to your responses. Susan |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
The smoothness and softness in this was amazing.You always know just what to pen.Very well done  angelblueyes |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you very much Angel! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like to say a kiss can open the door to so much more...James |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh...so wonderful, Susan. Patricia |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Susan, this is really good writing. I'm glad that I didn't miss it. Poems get down the page so fast, don't they? Hugs  Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Susan, that was fantastic!  EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A wonderful write Susan, so sensual in the tone and texture. TD |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
James~ True that, a kiss can open many a door..Thanks for reading! Patricia~ Thank you! Ethel~ Alway happy to have a response from you! And yes, they do slide down fast..thanks for reading and the hug.. EA~Thanks for reading! TD~Thank you! Susan [This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (08-11-2003 01:08 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Susan . . . and this is why I adore your writing . . . If you can take only what I give and make me once again feel whole then I will gently touch your soul for tonight *smile* xxoo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
caused a flutter in my...er..chest grins |
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~*Tantalize*~ Junior Member
since 2003-07-29
Posts 26Sunny California (San Francisco Bay Area) |
amazing, beautiful, perfect. Thanks for posting, I LOVE it! ~Jen "There are moments in my life I will always remember, not because they were big events, but because you were there to make the worth remembering." ~Un |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Vandana~ Thank you! Aenimal~ LOL, that is exactly what I was going for..my life is now complete...Thank you for reading and making me laugh. Jen~Thank you so much for all the wonderful words! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sue, So sorry, I didn't forget you, I swear, I just didn't scroll up far enough...please forgive....Thank you for reading and adoring! xxoo back at you! Susan |
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