Open Poetry #28 |
Today |
SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Today And when I wake to find the morning sun another day have I to believe that all there is that really counts are the visions we create from one stone to another movement is our one true fate When I ask you if you care though it be often Have patience with me understand it's my soul self searching looking for another stone another step worth taking And in the twilight of the day when birds cease their singing when children lay their heads to rest and greater minds are thinking I take a breath slow and deep my mind focused on the prize another chance to live and dream in the world that I've created |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love your awareness of co-creating your life. You care and you trust, it could be enough. Enjoyed your write. Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have actually gotten to read a poem by the Golden One! It has been AGES! Your loving, caring self came shining through this piece. You have a deep understanding of your ownself and the life you have been creating. You are able to rise up and get a macrocosmic view of your corner of the world. The power is within you to create and orchestrate the music you would like to hear. EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-02-2003 09:27 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! You go girl! (kiss on cheek) I believe you should always follow your heart and use the advantage that God offers you, create your own art and see how you can make your own little corner seem so comely! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, dearest friend, carpe diem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Electra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Hi SimplyGold... I really like this. You know how to make your life your own, and that's so important. Bec "Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
All of my life I have been searching for these words so I could explain why I keep asking....now I can show them to my family and they can see why...thank you for sharing this. Bless you so much. "When I ask you if you care though it be often Have patience with me understand it's my soul self searching looking for another stone another step worth taking" For all my life I have looked for these words, because no one understands. Love, SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SimplyGold - I've always said you were simply gold, and this verse proves it... BC |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Margherita, Thank you. SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
JamesM. Thank you, it's good to be back. I'll be looking for you.. SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
EA, Thank you for the feedback. It's always so good to read you Birthday girl. Yes, I've been away and what a wonderful surprise to come back and see the wonderful poetic growth that everyone has made. I've got a lot of catching up to do. P.S. Was sad to see the note from Magnus. He will be missed. SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Noah, Thank you sweet one. So glad to read your writing again. Loved the reflections from Ireland. SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Bec, Thank you for peeking in. I'll be looking for you too! SheraRose, You'd be surpised how many do! Just read your latest and enjoyed very much. You are a sensitive writer. I'll be looking for more. SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Bill, Thank you. Bet you didn't know it but, you are a mentor to me. SG |
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