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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2003-08-03 04:54 PM

Reality...
nestles DEEP
within my heart
You know
You're not allowed
to cling to me
I mean you
just
CAN'T
I'm afraid my thoughts
Are in love
With reality
I think you were
led to believe
That this
Faerie tale Pryncess
Stuck within the dragon's tower
Was meant to be saved
by your kiss
disillusionment
shrouds your eyes
fantasy
your choice of drink
You just can't
CLING
TO ME!!!
Because
I am afraid...
I am in love
with
reality

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-03-2003 05:37 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-08-03 04:55 PM

Reality is where we need to know
that is the place we wake to
everyday...

Very good write, Ceinwyn...

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

2 posted 2003-08-03 07:25 PM

Some people want to be a part of our lives when its just not possible, even when they know they arent capable of such roles. sometimes even convincing you they are, only to let u down...ooooh people.

I'm sticking to reality from now on too..I'm soooo naive sometimes, believing lies..blah blah..someone shut me up! I'm ranting

good to read ya Kris.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-08-03 07:55 PM

Kris, this is a very good poem...very
thought-provoking. That's a good
thing....to make me think. LOL

Hugs

Ethel

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

4 posted 2003-08-03 08:43 PM

mmmm i like, sounded very fourious to me...sometimes space is all that is needed, loved this...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2003-08-03 08:54 PM

A very real moment captured with your words...forcing me to take a realistic look at things.

Patricia

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

6 posted 2003-08-03 11:06 PM

It has been said that reality is for those amongst us who can not handle drugs; it also has been said that love is a drug.

I like your poem.

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