Open Poetry #28 |
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puttin' it away |
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Abe Senior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 694Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end! ![]() |
PUTTIN' IT AWAY There's no alarm in the morning I can sleep, until I wake No chores, unless I want to And, no money left to make. No more wishing, that I had things If I don't have them, now There's no sense in trying to learn If I don't already know, just how. I retired my old heart And put my love away Wondering, where my soul will go When, it comes my judgment day. No more dreaming of tomorrow To look down that road, to see Just knowing that I've traveled As far, as, I'm going to be. The sunrise is blinding And my visions are a blur And the full moon is scary As I feel those ancient urges, stir. I retired my old heart And put my love away Wondering, where my soul will go When, it comes my judgment day. The years are running down As the seconds, tick, the clock And the hours pass, so quickly As I inventory, my stock. The memories start to fade And, all those faces, too No wondering where I'm going Or what, I'm going to do. I retired my old heart And put my love away Wondering, where my soul will go When, it comes my judgment day. Del "Abe" Jones 8-5-03 Del "Abe" Jones |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I enjoyed this very much, my husband keeps talking about not having too worry about tomorrow. |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well done! Enjoyed. Chris ![]() |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
enjoyed.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, me too good write |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Abe, I found this so sad...amazingly good and sad... Susan |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This was sad, but I enjoyed reading it. angelblueyes |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Abe~ Retired, huh ? Well ... now you can just spend MORE TIME writing .. and traveling~ AND ... you can do BOTH at once ! ![]() *Huglets* to you my friend~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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