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Without You
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Without You |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Without You I am raw just the edge of a gulf tide ripped from my ocean lover slapped hard against the sand rolling in pain pushed and pulled getting nowhere without you "I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Ouch! I can feel that sting! s.a.g. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I'm down beneath the undertow.. eu...phor...i...a oops sorry drifted there l#ve that song l@ve these words |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Whew, Helen!! That sounds like it hurts BAAAADDDDDD Ouch!! Hugs  Ethel |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
awsome..the sound of this is gorgeous insanity is not a crime |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Easy to turn your back on the sea....love it, but be attentive at all times.....or hold the hand of someone who is. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
waves crash... as we.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
God, I felt this |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickGal~ You ALWAYS give the reader a GREAT read~ This is very, very good dear lady~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Excellent imagery here dear, Lady. OUCH! I could feel it as I read it ... powerful write here! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
and left me to drown in words |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Excellent Helen! hugs, Chris |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This packs an even more powerful punch when eyes slide to the picture of you standing in the waves. *S* Excellent write... yes! *S* |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
God, this was beautiful! You have so much to give lady! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your pain tears through the soul of your reader making them weep....Stunning and heartfelt... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
you help me get through these emotions i wade through here, alone in my room. so thankyou.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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alisa Member
since 2003-08-20
Posts 70Florida |
wow, this is great...  |
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