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Face against the pane
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Face against the pane |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Standing face to wall see through bricks house the home bending face to floor see through footsteps left by you Asking each wall how you've been hoping they've watched you lately craning aching neck solace falls from the all seeing sky Standing face against the pane wet fragrance of pavement doused in rain cold compress of clear cut glass upon my cheek feels as if it has all the answers. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Good gracious Gem...that was awesome! I swore that today was saturday and I wasn't going to think deep today...hehe, but now you've gone and made the wheels in my mind spin. ...thinking... That can quite possibly be a curse...I think we all have it round here! Loved the write lady! Tima |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you rock you sfcmaster..grins this is one of your best, least i think so but what do i know i'm a tfwker |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Standing face against the pane wet fragrance of pavement doused in rain cold compress of clear cut glass upon my cheek feels as if it has all the answers." ~ Vintage gem drops!  Love ya, LL |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Wow...Gemma...VERY cool write! So descriptive...I could SEE this. By far, my favorite of yours.  Hugs,  ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
God Woman! What a write! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent! Eric |
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