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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-08-30 01:43 PM


Standing face to wall
see through bricks house the home
bending face to floor
see through footsteps left by you

Asking each wall how you've been
hoping they've watched you lately
craning aching neck
solace falls from the all seeing sky

Standing face against the pane
wet fragrance of pavement doused in rain
cold compress of clear cut glass upon my cheek
feels as if it has all the answers.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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timothysangel1973
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1 posted 2003-08-30 01:45 PM


Good gracious Gem...that was awesome!

I swore that today was saturday and I wasn't going to think deep today...hehe, but now you've gone and made the wheels in my mind spin.

...thinking...
That can quite possibly be a curse...I think we all have it round here!

Loved the write lady!

Tima

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-08-30 03:16 PM


you rock you sfcmaster..grins this is one of your best, least i think so but what do i know i'm a tfwker
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-08-30 04:34 PM



"Standing face against the pane
wet fragrance of pavement doused in rain
cold compress of clear cut glass upon my cheek
feels as if it has all the answers."

~ Vintage gem drops!

Love ya,
LL


vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
4 posted 2003-08-30 04:37 PM



Wow...Gemma...VERY cool write!
So descriptive...I could SEE this.
By far, my favorite of yours.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-08-30 04:39 PM


God Woman! What a write!
Ericc
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Posts 4178

6 posted 2003-08-30 04:41 PM


Excellent!
Eric

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