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TWENTY OR LESS...#137
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TWENTY OR LESS...#137 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
TWENTY OR LESS…#137 Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon silky flirtation blurring over cerebral imperfections soft moments daring contemplate everything in a candle’s glow You CAN make a difference: |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I like it. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
now this can change my mood  thanks Mark M |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Walker: More to come... Maureen:  -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Love this.Can get lots of ideas from this.Also love the glow of candles  angelblueyes |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
it is mystical and shrouded in a deep well of magicial wonder, great piece wolfy |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mark, I love this..... soft moments daring contemplate everything in a candle’s glow Hugs  Ethel |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
I enjoyed it I wear my crown of thorns |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes.... ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Crystal: Oh, really...? Wolfy, you have captivated me with your original response -- thank you. Hey Ethel, I'll put on some Chopin... Thank you, Match, for enjoying. Nancy, I thought you might like this one... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
soft moments daring contemplate everything in a candle’s glow indeed an image to enjoy... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Soft and senuous - yes!! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
good,,, |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I adore your 20 or less, sir. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
More please [This message has been edited by Aenimal (09-17-2003 08:46 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, more please. You have perfected this to a fine art. Thanx Mark. |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
simple word choice can make it or break it. and you make it interesting. you know just the right amount of imagery to spark a vision. your words are universal. and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Wow... talk about an encore...  Much obliged, Dixie. Ron: Savoured, actually... Chris: Two most welcome feelings. Q: Let's hope so. Meg: Really?? Then I'll write some more with you in mind. Raph: I write 'em as I feel 'em -- "stay tuned". Thank YOU, Barry -- a fine artist in your own style which I much enjoy. mytuesdaywishes, thank you very much for the nice response -- I love to "spark visions" with just the right amount of substance -- and I DO mean WORDS. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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