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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Midnight rendevous Soul searching Exposed naked Beneath the stars Heart aching Hungry for something more Your touch Would be nice Your kiss Wet Against my mouth Alas, I only Hold you in dreams You left me Kissing a shadow Beneath the moonlight Tears caught somewhere Between space and time I'm trapped within this fragile state of mind It's time I just know it's time To let the waves of disappointment Come crashing Over me again Tiny specks of emotion Nestle deep Within these open wounds That never seem to quite heal Despite the fact I haven't really Given your memory The time of day That's only when I'm awake Yet Unfortunately When I close my eyes That's when I love you again... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Achingly beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"Despite the fact I haven't really Given your memory The time of day" Ahhhh yes, the haunting in your dreams ... I know this feeling well at times ... mercy. Enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You left me Kissing a shadow Beneath the moonlight ~*~ so heartbreaking... so poignant... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sometimes our subconscious knows us better than we know ourselves. Heartwrenching and beautiful. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jesus you write beautifully this made my heart ache but in a good way *wink* xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
s'why i can't sleep.. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I try to sleep with one eye open... ... sometimes it helps. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"You left me Kissing a shadow Tears caught somewhere Between space and time" Kris, you wrote the words that I could not....but, fortunately time has healed the wounds.  Lovin' healin' hugs, Linda |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
like a crystal...set in stone.. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
It's time I just know it's time To let the waves of disappointment Come crashing Over me again Tiny specks of emotion Nestle deep Within these open wounds That never seem to quite heal Kris, and you say you want to know what feeds MY muse...wow, maybe we have the same thing..a worthless man? Into my library gal.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
"I just know it's time To let the waves of disappointment Come crashing Over me again" -beautiful "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
fabulous. however that is spelled  insanity is not a crime |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Guys thanks...really really appreciate your responses...  haha this is why god invented nightlights,eh!? better yet..vodka...j/k lots of these xxx and some of these ooo, Kris If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-03-2003 08:49 PM).] |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
And with your final word, a collective sigh of the many I held with my read of this. This is incredible and touched my heart... Patricia |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...sigh damn |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Tiny specks of emotion Nestle deep Within these open wounds That never seem to quite heal Despite the fact I haven't really Given your memory The time of day Great lines, all throughout this.. |
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scuffedshoe2 Junior Member
since 2003-08-04
Posts 39 |
Pretty, and to the point. -Ian |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Big  it's unfortunate that you're feeling this, but I do take comfort that I'm not the only one in the world who feels like this... Beautiful, thank you so much for sharing this It's hard to grow up and watch your friends remain in the same mindset that you left them in |
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