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You And I |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I wrote this for a friend of mine to give to his wife. Take your hand and put it in mine. Let's walk away the time. Let's talk about all of the things. Of all of our cares and all of our dreams. Let's both of us begin to share. All of our love and all of our cares. It's been a long time since we've talked. It's been a long time since we've walked. I miss you so much these days. It seems as if your always away. I get lonely every night. My heart seems to be lacking that special light. I'm telling you this, because I love you so. Because I don't want our love to go. We need to take some time for us. We need to rebuild that wonderful trust. Now tell me what you think you need. And the fire to your heart I'll feed. For when we begin to see eye to eye. Our love will soar and fly. You are the love of my life. My beautiful,caring, and angelic wife. angelblueyes |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
that was just so sweet and pure, i just loved it, well done  |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
exhale:Thank you.Sometimes it's heard to say what you mean and in this instance I was able to help a friend angelblueyes |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Crystal, this is such a sweet poem you have written for your friend's wife. I know she will appreciate it when he gives it to her.  Hugs  Ethel |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Ethel:Thank you so much.For my true friends I would walk through the embers of he)) and push them to fly free as angels do.For we all have it within us  angelblueyes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed these thoughtful words...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful poem indeed. What a lovely gift for your friends! No heart will be indifferent to such a warm message of love. Love, Margherita |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
James:Thanks.Anything is possible if it's true love. Margherita: Thanks so much.My friends and family mean alot to me. angelblueyes |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo breathtakingly beautiful, sweet friend, I know your friend was very touched by this and will forever thank you for this special gift of love for his love! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Crystal, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Noah:Thank you and you have become one of my sweet friends. Crystal |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrifically penned,,, |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
QJQ:Thank you. Crystal |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I think this is going to score major points for someone....for both and for yourself as well. Nicely done. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Magnus:Thank you my friend. Crystal |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
wonderful.... indeed regards sudhir |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Sudhir:Thank you my friend. Crystal |
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