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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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His hair shines like fire in the sun he walks into the school head down hidden from the world no confidence unknowing how amazing he truly is he speaks beautifull words they flow like a river with the pen as his current but they hate him they hate him because hes different unique he'll just have to keep on going head down hidden from the world no confidence will he ever know how wonderfull he really is... "so kiss me hard cause this will be the last time that i let you"-D.C |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
they hate him because hes different unique we all are , its how its perceived , if we all could accept that we all are strange, and not be so judgmental, the world would be a cooler place, right? right........  |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Maybe from seeing this write he will know how wonderfully in reality he is.Welcome to Passion's I hope you enjoy it here. angelblueyes |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
excellent analogy, but sometimes a simple hello brightens up a persons day. |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I'm different too. Our writing brings us all together. I hope someday soon he will at least gain confidence in his writing skills, because you conveyed your message very well, which is a true sign of a good poet. Hidden no longer, my friend.Dawn |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
What better way for him to shine than through his gift of writing. May his writing bring him confidence and much happiness as it has for me. Take care..........Sue I am in motion |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
wow thank you all for your comments, maybe one day i will show him this poem, but till that day i will always support him, and i'm glad you all feel the same way |
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