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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2003-08-06 03:06 PM

“A LOVER’S SWEET LULLABY”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Soft music I play on this moonlit night,
and beauty is seen deeply in your eyes,
they sing to me like a mystical melody,
my heart is faster, in-between it sighs…

You and this guitar is a tender blending,
as my fingers caress its strings to play,
they dance for you in rhythmic motion,
sounds ring out in a passionate bouquet…

When you sway to the strum of chords,
my eyes tend to close to its rhapsody,
this dreamy guitar sounds its soft tones,
and I sing to you a lover’s sweet lullaby…
~~~~

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-08-06 03:08 PM

very beautiful write,,,

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-08-06 03:10 PM

And a sweet lovers lullaby it is,
Mr. romantic Bill.

Hugs

Ethel

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-08-06 03:41 PM

Very nice...James

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-08-06 04:00 PM

Beautiful.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

5 posted 2003-08-06 04:07 PM

great job Billie boy..

Close your eyes and dream of love,
And of passion filled with heat,
Then I will have my way with you
When you drift off to sleep.

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

6 posted 2003-08-06 07:24 PM

So beautiful, Bill. I need a sweet lullaby...having a difficult time sleeping lately.

Lovely!

Patricia

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2003-08-06 07:29 PM

Quite a beautiful song my friend. Such a gift to receive. TD

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

8 posted 2003-08-06 07:50 PM

Bill...I love these poems with the romantic strings of a guitar or the chords of sultry piano rhythms. Wonderful poem as usual.

***Ivy Rose

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-08-06 07:53 PM

Bill . . .

here:

You and this guitar is a tender blending,
as my fingers caress its strings to play,

you have mastered metaphor beautifully
xxoo

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

10 posted 2003-08-06 08:11 PM

Bill,

Your words caress my mind.

Susan C.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2003-08-06 10:26 PM

they dance for you in rhythmic motion,
sounds ring out in a passionate bouquet…

your well runs deep,
love the use of the guitar......does she have a name?

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2003-08-07 12:28 PM

romance at its finest.....love reading you...

hugsss
L~

The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

13 posted 2003-08-07 12:40 PM

What a beautiful lullaby it is.You are the romatic king.
angelblueyes

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

14 posted 2003-08-07 12:49 PM

My knees are weak...boo hooing from this one. Lovely, lovely write. Sweet as it can be. It's a lucky girl that gets your heart. Nice as they always are.