Open Poetry #28 |
Nadia & Peter - a biographical triolet |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nadia & Peter His notes were his gift and skill, music to her heart ~ Her fervor for his talent would last many years With passion toward her, he devoted his art His notes were his gift and skill, music to her heart Over one thousand letters, their love, they’d impart But to meet face to face, this was their greatest fear His notes were his gift and skill, music to her heart ~ Her fervor for his talent would last many years quote: Excerpted from http://wcet.org.au/websites/nadia_kokot/Tchaitxt1.htm [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-07-2003 08:47 AM).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
very sad...very very sad...i loved this though history is my fav subject...thank you...h |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Karilea, this is a beautifully penned triolet, though sad but beautiful. Thank you for the excerpt on Tchaikovsky. Very very interesting. Maree fate is not just |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Yes, truly sad...but thank you for sharing your knowledge and wisdoms with me...I have learned so much from you in so many ways, Karilea. This is but just one example... Hugs, Patricia |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, this is so beautiful, though it is very sad..... I loved both the triolet and the love story. Thank you for sharing this. Hugs Ethel |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
They were an immense gift to each other and look at what it produced! So even though the end of the story is sad, they had so much more than others might ever dream of ..... Loved your words too, dear Karilea. Thank you, I enjoyed this contribution! Love and hugs, Margherita |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Sunshine../\..very nice to read..and nice to learn.. ../\..Spiros ---------------calm------------ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Such a creative and informative poem. It takes much talent to combine the two so beautifuly. Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
yes,enjoyed this read |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Karilea, to take a triolet and do this with it . . . is quite amazing the form alone restricts you . . . find myself scratching out line after line but here . . . you have told a tale of history which I had not known of prior. Thank you for this and that xxoo |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Karilea ~~ This was so fascinating. I love it when you write a poem and add a history lesson to it. You are such a remarkable talent. Hugs and smiles, Marti |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...Such a beautiful poem, and the story of the life of a very talented man...so enjoyed..thank you! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karilea~ I found my self getting so lost in this, which means, I didnt want it to end...I love a good history moment..... Lauren~ The way you move me |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wonderful comments, thanks to all of you. Perhaps we should make a challenge of taking some historical facts of artists, and seeing what we can come up within, in whatever form we choose. It's just another way of learning something new every day! |
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