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Reflecting Sea
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Reflecting Sea |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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You hold a coin of passage from ancient times Flexing your acute foam making merits rhyme I am your house dweller and aquatic cohort Discerning your persistence & mindful focus Genuine manner of reckoning and attainable streams Disbanding six senses to a level of accomplishments achieved Plunging into the affirmation of a level of deep adept Taking on passion, seas of which I have no doubt or uncertainty left There is nothing given, nothing offered, nothing sacrificed Just flowing fruits of positive measures in various increments of life Abstaining from false speech and neglect You, falling & rising sway with wings of common threads Essentially claiming a passage of suggestions Where your symbolic treasures tune a musical degree Turning the face of truth on our voyage of meditation Encompassing the entire path, reflecting where sunrise follows Shaping in a full view of light, the Neptune of sublime attitudes Your skillful intentions are a natural sense of inner joy Intensified by positive swells of kindness towards nature’s void Providing such inner pleasures, that virtue forces Content with a healthy sense, within the realm of your profound expanse Purification of the ocean, brings such inner enhancements Cerebral exercises through spiraling spays that loop Where fireside awakenings moisten our endless sands of hope |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
well written and intimate...with the aroma of the sea and of passion! Rf |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is written with the scent, the fervor, and the calmness of the sea all in one.  Crystal |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed the penning,,, |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Morning Lee J. Is that ole sea reflecting at your front door? Beautiful write my friend. Such beauty you do share with us. See Ya sending hugs from Ohio Love Bon-Bon  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Lovely....makes me think about going to the beach later this evening.. (going outside to kick the over-heating van that keeps me prisioner) Susan |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ Your pennings always leave such a lastingly lovely feel~ 'You hold a coin of passage from ancient times' Oh my ! I simply LOVE this line~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ Psst ... read your note in one of my poems about information for including pictures/graphics on a post. Email me and I'll 'try' to explain it~ noles1@totcon.com ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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