Spilled Ink 2003 (edited version)

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RunningWolf
Junior Member

since 2003-09-14

Posts 24
Michigan USA

0 posted 2003-09-16 11:30 PM

At the top of the day he stands upon the hill.
The bright sun shines seemingly through his being
As he awaits the night.
His name is Conitius.
Born of Jerusalem he is here to battle Nocturnus and
the Gryphon King.
In the village below Royal guards line the palace walls and surround the castle.
Archers have taken post.
Meeting in the colusium they will battle each other
as the gladius soldiers watch.
There to crown the winner will be Zeuse.
Mars is in the back talking to Pluto and Saturn.
Venus and Aphrodite are arguinig over the new name
for their department store as Hercules walks by.
They fight over him often.
Neptune just designed a new kitchen appliance worth every dollar spent.
Saturn was bragging up his new line of automobiles
when scorpius mentioned something about mars being
his hero.
They all laughed from Helius's new potion.
He called it Laughing gas and decided to add an
extra touch to make helium.
Monty Python and his crew showed up and Jupiter
screamed like a school girl in love with the beatles.
It was then that I arrive with my lady.
She was an American girl with a detachable foot.
Her lesbian sister tagged along for the ride.
We had tons of fun when the Indian elephants showed up.
Before night fall there was a storm. Nocturnus hid in the basement of the colusium
while his brother Thunder Bringer stayed and sang his song.
It was called God Of Thunder. Later the rock band
called KISS did a cover of it.
Thor was happy to meet thunder Bringer.
The two shared alot.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-09-16 11:35 PM

I enjoyed this.

Crystal

RunningWolf
Junior Member

since 2003-09-14

Posts 24
Michigan USA

2 posted 2003-09-18 07:48 PM

just me. thanks for the first comment. im currently working on a second part to spilled ink and have no ideas. anyone with an idea please let me know.

-trips over his own keyboard wire-

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

3 posted 2003-09-19 04:20 PM

cool I like if i get ne ideas i'll let u kno

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

RunningWolfsLilGirl
New Member

since 2003-09-18

Posts 4
Michigan

4 posted 2003-09-19 06:35 PM

hey runningwolf just wanted to give you an idea for spilled ink. i think you should add some greek myth to it since most of it so far looks roman.
maybe have somethin about calculus bragging about how texas made his math easier to learn. texas instruments is what im referin to.
but have a good evening and ill see you this weekend.

great poem by the way.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-09-19 07:19 PM

LOL, now I understand about your spilled ink comment.
Bet you use neon colors.

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

6 posted 2003-09-20 11:06 AM

Hello RunningWolf. How are you doing? What can I say...you have not lost your touch James. Seen any mean green frogs lately? Your poem was very interesting by the way. If you are going to use Kiss then you have to make a reference to how a Morbid Angel watches over all! ROFLMAO! Anyway I have to run my friend. It has been years since last we got to speak to one another in person...but I am glad to see something new after all this time. Your buddy - Kevin a.k.a. DarkPoetry, MidniteAngel, EvocativeVerse, DementedRadish...you pick one! LOL!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2003-09-20 11:26 AM

There was so much in this writing!! And I loved every word! I can't wait for the next one...

The picture was a little scary, is that what you were going for? (I think so)...

Susan

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