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Sighs of Twilight
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Sighs of Twilight |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Fat whispering sighs of twilight Evensongs, pinning up her skylight Between earth and peace so, kindly to everyone And the inescapable fact of her immortality Perfects conditions assuring we are her cause eternally Kissed by the delicate lips of twilight’s evensong Bestial peace remembering wonderful beauty and where we belong Discovering the multitudes of carefully painted scenes Giving remembrance full with faithful limbs of crimson trees Embroidered by a mountainous wreath of dreams |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
 This is beautiful and exquisite. I wish I could write with half an ounce of passion that you do.It flows and abounds form the page with such beauty and grace.  Crystal |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Beautiful. This is the first poem I have read of yours...and now I am wondering how to top that! LOL! Well done. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ A lovely write, enjoyed the read. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lee, this is so beautiful. I love the way you write, lady.  Hugs  Ethel |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice penning,,, |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Lovely time of day, in the evening hour especially with a cold glass of tea. Loved reading!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Exceptionally nice and pleasurable poem to read. Kinda sets a very enjoyable mood. Thanx LeeJ |
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