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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Alone walkman and I the same way everyone else is it always sounds better intoxicated trying to tell you it doesn't when it does for now for now this moment alone digging you up long gone asking why faceless swaying questions never lie still long enough to make sense imagine you live this sobriety evil think straight longing you chain mail me back I will not answer to save you haze and I we shimmer caught sight of myself in motionless mirror forever moving mind won't forget how you made me invisible contour of lip longing to be kissed with feel where honesty lies this music only I can hear we all have our own sondtrack . . . . . Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh YES....we certainly do all have our own soundtrack! This is amazing, my friend, and I liked the thought of 'haze and I...we shimmer'! Excellent pictures here as I read. I just enjoyed the entire piece, so well done...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gem, yes we certainly do although yours sounds blazenly similar to my own *smile* xxoo |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
wow... |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"this music only I can hear we all have our own sondtrack" Amen little sister! Great write! xxoo Tima |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
 ... ... ...ok. this is rerally good gem..sorry I missed it And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
oooh forgot about this...it didnt go down to well. i think because it made little sense. he he but thankyou lizzie.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Gemma  Sorry I didn't see this the first time around. Oh, and thanks for the e-mail. Hope college classes are going good!! See you later, little friend.  Hugs  Ethel; |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
"won;t forget how you made me invisable" wow "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Yes we do and that's what makes us each special individuals. Crystal |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
it does make sense stoopid  my soundtrack..would be? dunno. you tell me And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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