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teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan

0 posted 2003-09-19 10:16 AM


lightly quickly run away
come and face this new day
forget the past
run away fast
can't face what you don't know
where do you plan to go
how is it I'm lost
what is the cost
of spending my days with you
I run away but from who
spinning spinning
losing winning
never knowing where I am
emotions overflow the dam
and I don't know can't see
where exactly I'm supposed to be
I need a little reassurance

Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last.

© Copyright 2003 Alicia Adams - All Rights Reserved
Mor-Estal Landis
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since 2003-09-03
Posts 10
Luca, Ventoren
1 posted 2003-09-19 10:37 AM


I'll tell you now...and now I'll tell you again, that was good. I loved it as i do all your work. keep it up.

Mor-Estal Landis, The Dark Star
"...Shadowed by Darkness, and Stalked by Despair..."

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-09-19 01:52 PM


Nicely done, Alicia!  I haven't had the opportunity to say HELLO and WELCOME until now.
WELCOME to Passions!


LOL, though it looks as if you've been here about as long as me, HELLO anyway.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-19-2003 01:53 PM).]

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
3 posted 2003-09-19 02:48 PM


This is good.
Crystal

teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan
4 posted 2003-09-22 10:19 AM


Thanx and yeah I may have been here as long as you but I never posted anything until this year.  And I still don't post much as you can tell.

Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last.

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