Open Poetry #28 |
a trip down the yellow brick road |
noah j Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 82on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair |
as often happens my memories are distorted looking through the essence of my murky soul they lie to me explaining the unforgivable telling me you are gone but i can't believe that i saw you yesterday skipping down the road but it was an illusion a forgotten scheme a lost dream i am trying to catch so i can remember what it was like so i can see you again in the glittering moonlight escaping from the shade of the shadow you made when you left me i will follow this road this yellow brick path hoping to one day spy a sight of you the only people for me are the mad ones-mad to live, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at once--jack kerouac |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh Noah,that's a rough road to skip along cyber heart hugs to you |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Wow. I know this so well. Reminds me of something I'd write if I'd have the guts to face those feelings. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
you are a wonderful poet. oh, and your personal quote at the bottom...lets just say you're my new favorite person because of that. jack keroac would approve :Þ. great work. and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful. |
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