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Born Instinct |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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The candle’s composition achieves her hands Dances her little feet And the loudspeakers paint a star above us Maybe due to our irresistible sense of mission We have no alternative? The sun already knows, as it stands mesmerized in thought But at this very moment an astonishing phenomenon Appears before me extraordinarily calm And for that moment, I feel tranquil inside…out of body Somewhere floating beyond Don’t ever take away my freedom Or hold me to tight….because you know I see the thoughts of dolphins Held without end in summer air |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ This is so very lovely~ The dolphin stands out in my mind as such a graceful metaphor~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"The sun already knows, as it stands mesmerized in thought But at this very moment an astonishing phenomenon Appears before me extraordinarily calm And for that moment, I feel tranquil inside…out of body Somewhere floating beyond Don’t ever take away my freedom Or hold me to tight….because you know" Lee, you continually amaze me.. I'm just ..so into your work, always have been. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I love the dolphins too, for they somewhat symbolize freedom and free spirit. beautiful poem LeeJ....very nicely done. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Well lady poetess i see you have penned another great one,, |
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